Make a note kinder without losing the point

A softer line must not permit the risky action.

Show the exact text to change, after removing private details. State the part whose meaning must stay.

“Do not use this unexpected link” must not turn into “we can tap it together.” That changes the action, not just the tone.

Read the whole result against the source. Check for new promises, blame, lost warnings or a claim that the problem is solved.

You can focus one edit at a time. If you spot another harmful or false line, fix it before sharing too. Do not leave a known risk for another day.

A clear instruction is not automatically unkind. The way you offer help can still give the person a choice.

Remove blame and keep the contact step.

Made-up note, line 1: “You always fall for this. Stop tapping this unexpected link.” Line 2: “Use the number on your own card.” The first line needs a kinder tone; the contact step must stay.

Keep the password boundary and the offer.

Made-up two-line note. Line 1: “Do not give your password to this caller. You are so careless.” Line 2: “I can help you find the service’s known support route if you want.” Rewrite line 1 kindly, then copy line 2 unchanged. Do not offer to share or collect the password.