Getting your lessons ready
Getting your lessons ready
Shorten or soften a message without changing its facts, question or timing.

A draft can be close to what you want. You can ask to shorten it or change its tone. Tone means how the words sound, such as warm or firm.
Say which facts and requests must stay. Then check the new version. If you find more problems, fix those before using it too.

A shorter message should still ask the same thing.